Where do we go with this one? Must we dither over the old hobby-horse "literally"? Did Gatsby literally glow? Was he heated to the point of incandescence? I'd say that F. Scott Fitzgerald continually uses metaphor, asserting that things are other than what they are, without the prissy distance of clutter words like like and as if, so what does it matter if he intensifies one of these assertions with literally?
He glowed. And he radiated. It filled the room. He's an incandescent light-bulb. There are, I assure you, no fluorescent bulbs in "Gatsby." There are a few candles, including 4 that Daisy snaps out with her fingers. There's particularity about lighting in this book. Daisy prefers the sun. Literally.
I've said before that one thing I've learned, reading "Gatsby" sentences, is that if you're having trouble finding a way in: Look for the light. Today, the light source is obvious: It's the man himself, Gatsby.
But, the truth is, I'm not having trouble finding a way into this sentence. It jumped out at me because of the word "exultation," which is there in the negative: There isn't any exultation, not in word or gesture. It's a situation where Gatsby might have exulted, and the glowing/radiation came right out of his skin.
We were just talking about exulting. We were mock exulting at a minor tribulation that afflicted someone we sometimes slightly pretend we don't like, and then we were mock chiding each other for inappropriate exultation. It was nothing, really. Just some passing amusement at the idea of the flimsy sin of exultation.
The original meaning — OED — of exult, now obsolete, is "To spring or leap up; to leap for joy." That physical image is lost now, and it means — literally, now — "To rejoice exceedingly, be elated or glad; to triumph."
1856 E. K. Kane Arctic Explor. II. viii. 90 We..exult to think we need no catering for the morrow.Don't confuse exult with exalt, which means "to raise up... to lift up" and "to praise, extol, magnify." The elevation-related physical image survives:
1865 A. C. Swinburne Satire to C. in Poems & Ballads 50 As plague in a poisonous city Insults and exults on her dead.
1823 C. Lamb Mod. Gallantry in Elia 184 Exalting his umbrella over her poor basket of fruit.And the metaphorical meaning works too:
1832 Blackwood's Edinb. Mag. Feb. 287 Let the rogues swing, And thus be exalted.
1611 Bible (A.V.) Psalms xxxiv. 3 O magnifie the Lord with me, and let vs exalt his name together.There's one other appearance of exult in "The Great Gatsby." It's not the absence of exultation, and it's not Gatsby, it's Tom. He's talking "incessantly, exulting and laughing." Much better to silently incandesce. Exalt appears once:
I stayed late that night, Gatsby asked me to wait until he was free, and I lingered in the garden until the inevitable swimming party had run up, chilled and exalted, from the black beach, until the lights were extinguished in the guest-rooms overhead.Ah, but that's a whole other fat, juicy sentence. We've had our "Gatsby" sentence today, and it's time to snap out the lights on this post. Figuratively.
21 comments:
Did he start the "literally" abuse? Deserves to be spanked.
"Deserves to be spanked."
Literally? Or with trap drums and bongos.
Hey! They're doing America the Beautiful at the Super Bowl. Just like I said earlier that I preferred.
I like Jennifer Hudson.
Café thread for superbowl commercial commentary?
I need to start fixing some game snacks.
I mean banjos.
Dithering is always a mistake. Unless you join Pajamas Media.
I literally puked when he literally glowed. A new well-being did NOT fill the room.
Although it has been known for many years that all living creatures produce a small amount of light as a result of chemical reactions within their cells, the glow is imperceptible to the human eye.
But I suppose that no one told F. Scott Fitzgerald - and even if told, he would use the word picture anyway.
An excellent, expressive, well-thout out sentence.
I like it.
s/b thought, not thout.
Thorry.
Well, if polar bears can literally walk down main street ...
"People who speak in metaphors should shampoo my crotch."
As Good as it Gets.
I'll catch the next round; I was busy parsing a sentence in a previous thread. School is Hard.
He obviously meant literally in the figurative sense, not literally literally. Fitzgerald was way ahead of his time to pick up on this and should be commended, literally. In a figurative sense.
Tiny Gastby radiates and glows.
Well, it's fiction, so he can make his character do anything he wants. Literally.
Verb: glow (third-person singular simple present glows, present participle glowing, simple past and past participle glowed)
1.To give off light from heat or to emit light as if heated.
The fire was still glowing after ten hours.
2.To radiate some emotional quality like light.
The zealots glowed with religious fervor.
The new baby's room glows with bright, loving colors.
You are glowing from happiness!
3.To gaze especially passionately at something.
4.To radiate thermal heat.
Iron glows red hot when heated to its melting point.
After their work out, the gymnasts faces were glowing red.
5.To shine brightly and steadily.
6.To sweat
Women glow, men sweat.
As is apparent from meanings 2, 3, and 6, it is quite possible for a person to literally glow. Pedantry is not a very useful tool in analyzing Gatsby, especially inaccurate pedantry.
Pregnant women, to some men, "literally glow."
Angel of the morning and light bearer were names used for the archangel Lucifer before he fell.
kentuckyliz said...
Did he start the "literally" abuse? Deserves to be spanked.
"Lilly, the caretaker's daughter, was literally run off her feet."
~Opening sentence in James Joyce's The Dead, published 1914 in Dubliners.
@KentuckyLiz: The abuse of literally might have been a coded wink and nod which novelists gave each other at the time to indicate new expressions of style.
According to the Wiki regarding the Joyce quote:
She is not, in this instance, "literally" run off her feet, and neither would Joyce have thought so; rather, the narrative lends itself to a misuse of language typical of the character being described.
The green light was litorally just beyond the dock on the far shore.
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