Mayo 8, 2018

"'Be Best!' Not 'Be the Best,' or 'Be Your Best,' or 'Be the Best You Can Be.' Not 'Be Better' or 'Be Safe,' or even 'Don’t Be a Jerk' (which is an actual campaign launched in New York to promote safe cycling)."

"'Be Best' just so plainly doesn’t hold up to the laws of English grammar, which require that a superlative adjective following an imperative verb be preceded by the definite article 'the.' Be good – be better – be the best: that’s the rule. In the 1990s, the British military ran a TV ad campaign that ended with the slogan: 'Army soldier: be the best.' Try it without the the. 'Army soldier: be best.' It sounds like you’re translating from the Sanskrit. How was the unfortunate name conceived? Could it have been [Melania] Trump, surrounded by administration flunkies, in a brainstorming session in Washington, floating 'Be Best' as a potential campaign name – and the assembled coterie being too polite – afraid, even – to correct her? Or was it some inside joke about [Melania] Trump’s English? (The first lady’s native Slovenian, like most Slavic tongues, Bulgarian and Macedonian excepting, has no definite articles.)"

From "'Be Best': does Melania Trump's oddly named initiative break the laws of grammar?/A Guardian copy editor unpacks the central grammatical flaw in the first lady’s new campaign. Is this [the] best the White House can do?" (The Guardian).

61 komento:

rhhardin ayon kay ...

Don't be second best. Be best.

It's okay for me.

rhhardin ayon kay ...

Be best in a Zsa Zsa accent announces it's a bad translation; but be best is okay in ordinary English, in a native accent, which directs the listener to the idiom it comes from.

Fabi ayon kay ...

If you're not first, you're last!

Curious George ayon kay ...

How do you say "go fuck yourself" in the four languages, other than English, that she speaks fluently?

Mark ayon kay ...

The Guardian, huh? Is this a guy who went to university? And when sick goes to hospital? Hardly one to tell someone how to speak the English.

Be good.
Be better.
Be best.

Ken B ayon kay ...

Bad advice for a Beatles Halloween costume?

rhhardin ayon kay ...

Fuck best. I'm taking the day off.

Oso Negro ayon kay ...

I never felt that celebration of First Ladies was necessary, but after eight years of press slobbering over Michelle Obama, a modicum of decency would be strongly preferred. Sad.

Ignorance is Bliss ayon kay ...

Didn't Scott Adams comment on intentionally including mistakes, so as to draw attention what you said?

Ken B ayon kay ...

Grauniad. So called because the paper has even misspelled its own name.

I had a thought similar to Hardin in the first comment. And as for “what kind of slogan”, perhaps not a hackneyed one?

That said, isn’t the grammar that makes this kinda dumb. It's the bland emptiness of it.

Fabi ayon kay ...

"Be brown slave" was rejected early in the motto evaluation process.

Bryant Likes ayon kay ...

Be best meme coming up!

MikeR ayon kay ...

"Didn't Scott Adams..." Yeah, me too. This is a good slogan. Ignore pedants who don't know how to write slogans.

chickelit ayon kay ...

Compared to Michelle, Melania is superlative.

Spiros Pappas ayon kay ...

This slogan works. It's good.

langford peel ayon kay ...

Well we should all follow American Cultural rules like that shaved down baboon April Ryan.

Make Ebonics the official language.

roesch/voltaire ayon kay ...

It’s most like so much from this White House.

Caldwell P. Titcomb IV ayon kay ...

"Eat Healthy"

Hagar ayon kay ...

Why should First Ladies have to have causes?

With Eleanor it probably came naturally, but the later ones have all seemed contrived.

Michael K ayon kay ...


Blogger roesch/voltaire said...
It’s most like so much from this White House.


Yes, inspiring.

Hillary has only the chardonnay wineries on her side anymore.

Peachy ayon kay ...

Be bigly.

Drago ayon kay ...

MK: "Hillary has only the chardonnay wineries on her side anymore."

Not true. She also has some sort of brace on her side..and her back...and I'm assuming her front.

But there is nothing wrong with her. Just a bit of dehydration.

Drago ayon kay ...

"Be Frequent Visitor To Wisconsin" was also derided by the dems...

D 2 ayon kay ...

Who, whom.


Annie ayon kay ...

This criticism is so Woke.

Seeing Red ayon kay ...

The Grauniad is critiquing?

Ralph L ayon kay ...

so as to draw attention what you said

"Be the Best" would also be totally forgettable.

Charlie Currie ayon kay ...

Be all you can be...even if it's second best.

mikee ayon kay ...

I compare and contrast the current First Lady's initiative with the last one: "The Healthy Hunger-Free Kids Act." For the children! Without any hunger, and free!

traditionalguy ayon kay ...

Be best clearly means be your best self. Don’t settle for your good for nothing, asshole self. It is a direct attack on Progresive Democrats.

Amadeus 48 ayon kay ...

As if Guardian cares about anything other than diminishing First Lady and destroying President of United States. I fart in Guardian general direction.

Rory ayon kay ...

I've seen retail ads where a company sells goods of three levels of quality, designated Good, Better, and Best.

WK ayon kay ...

Be Best!

Me like slogan. It good.

Rosalyn C. ayon kay ...

Saying "be the best" would probably have been criticized for suggesting elitism, unfair competition, white supremacism, isolationism, you name it. What she meant is more along the lines of "to thine own self be true" and "aim for the best version of yourself physically, mentally, emotionally, and socially," neither of which fits on a t shirt. "Be best" is a good conversation starter. "Be the best" is a conversation killer.

traditionalguy ayon kay ...

Interestingly, "Be Best" is an amazingly hopeful mantra. It contains the revelation that you are the best and need to continue to be yourself. It sums up the message to us in the first Chapter of First Peter in two words. If you don't believe, me read it for yourself.

Original Mike ayon kay ...

Think Different.

Original Mike ayon kay ...

(nails on chalkboard)

wwww ayon kay ...


I don't understand why it's not Be Your Best.

Michael K ayon kay ...

"I don't understand why it's not Be Your Best."

Maybe that is your fault, not hers ?

Hindi-nagpakilala ayon kay ...

So the slogan is following more of the advertising or newspaper slogan of omitting of function/helper words. The definite article here, while grammatically correct, also in some sense limits the rather indefinite message of the slogan - Be [the] Best [X] or Be [your] Best.

It's a neat little slogan - it aims at excellence while allowing the hearer to determine what constitutes their personal best. Sappy and sentimental? Probably, but if a first lady wants to do something, a generic message encouraging personal excellence is not a bad thing to try so long as this doesn't require a government bureaucracy to regulate, promote, and administer it. The last thing this country needs is the Be Best Bureau of Bureaucrats (BBBB).

traditionalguy ayon kay ...

The grammarians here want her to order people to "be your best." But Melania is instead giving the kids a mantra they can repeat to themselves. Be Best! They must learn for themselves what is best is in every situation from wise adult teachers.

wwww ayon kay ...

Maybe that is your fault, not hers ?


well it's not a big deal either way. Russian & some eastern European languages don't have articles, so I wondered if that was why. The initiative sounds like a good cause.

Ingachuck'stoothlessARM ayon kay ...


Me and my homies* here in the homeless shelter found "You didn't build that" to be not only grammatically correct, but quite motivating.

*I know, I know-- "my homies and I"

chickelit ayon kay ...

Crotchety sticklers don't realize that Melania appeals to non-native speakers.

chickelit ayon kay ...

Why don't *concerned* grammarians concern themselves with the erosion of subjunctive verbs forms from the press? "Alleged" becomes fact according to mood swing.

rehajm ayon kay ...

It’s a poke at the everybody gets a trophy crowd and that burn soaks in while they’re still bitching about the grammar.

tim maguire ayon kay ...

Right, because slogans never break grammar rules to be pithy.

Technically, it's wrong, but I have no problem with it. Dropping the the makes it more alliterative. It rolls off the tongue better and is more memorable.

stevew ayon kay ...

It's marketing, this sort of error encourages attention. Mission accomplished.

Think Different.

I'm not going to complain so long as she doesn't use "I" when "me" is correct.

-sw

Jaq ayon kay ...

Boy it's amazing how many words they can whip up for "Melania has kooties."

Jaq ayon kay ...

Maybe she wrote the dossier. It reads like Boris Badinov.

TrespassersW ayon kay ...

Huh. People get paid to write pissy tripe like that?

Jaq ayon kay ...

I swear it seems more every day like Trump pays them to write stuff like this.

Jaq ayon kay ...

I think somebody missed the quotation marks.

stonethrower ayon kay ...

"Be Best" I like it.

walter ayon kay ...

Blogger Caldwell Titcomb IV said...
Eat Healthy"
5/8/18, 7:52 PM
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AKA Eat This

Char Char Binks, Esq. ayon kay ...

All slogans must be in complete sentences.

PM ayon kay ...

As far as slogans, it's really what you do leading up to it. "Be smart. Be strong. Be true. Be best."

You really think "Out of milk?" would've been better than Got milk?

Sigivald ayon kay ...

It's 2018, o Guardian prescrptivist.

Much grammar, so change.

Be best.

jg ayon kay ...

They forgot that "to be" is also a verb and not only a copula?

Darcy ayon kay ...

I think Melania is exquisite. I cringed at "Be Best". My guess is that nobody wanted to correct her charming bad grammar. <-- My Best shot at it.

driverdonald ayon kay ...

It’s simple and direct. Which is the only law actively enforced by listeners.

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